I’m working on some lesson notes. Please can you check if the following sentence is proper English?
Here is a link to the according lesson in form of a dialogue from the Collection “Ab jetzt lerne ich Deutsch! Privat!”
I’m working on some lesson notes. Please can you check if the following sentence is proper English?
Here is a link to the according lesson in form of a dialogue from the Collection “Ab jetzt lerne ich Deutsch! Privat!”
I don’t see any link, Veral :S
You should not see the link. I want to have the OK from a native English speaker that I can say it this way.
Vera, I do not see any link.
Steve,
Vera wants natives to check the phrase << Here is a link to the according lesson in form of a dialogue from the Collection “Ab jetzt lerne ich Deutsch! Privat!” >>
Thank you Xena. That’s exactly my question.
Aha! It would have helped if the sentence concerned had been in quotation marks.
I do not fully understand the sentence so that means that it is not as good as it could be.
Vera, do you mean
“Here is a link to the corresponding lesson, in the form of a dialogue from the Collection…”
without the context it is still no entirely clear to me what this means.
Yes, it would be better if I had done this.
Thank you, Steve. You got the meaning
There are two lessons about the same topic. One is a dialogue, the other one is like a diary entry.
Then the sentence might be even clearer if it read; “Here is a link to a matching lesson, this time in the form of a dialogue, from the Collection…”
Danke Steve.