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I had kind of ecstacy when I was in dreamboat about my ardent love, but now I think she wasn’t a pacifist and I Anticipated mistakenly.

I think these writing exercises probably fit better in the writing exchange. "I had a kind of ecstasy when I was dreaming about my ardent love, but now I think she never was a pacifist and my love was misplaced.

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Yes sir. But I was trying to use 4 words and use them in the sentence. …those words are :dreamboat, ecstacy, ardent, and Anticipated
But yes I am pretty sure you are right about that it’s better to do some changes

I anticipated an ardent ride with my dreamboat but my ecstasy was more idealized than realized.